Time for another blog chain!
This month's prompt: Setting the Scene
Write a location description, and make us feel as if we are there. No dialogue, no introductory comments, just a location. We're the tourists, you're the guide.
There's a divergence along the road, splitting off to the left. For the last few miles, drivers went by lush green trees with branches full of thick leaves, and only glimpses of a space beyond, glimpses at a silvery expanse of water. Now this new path leads to a clearing through the beautiful but isolating trees. The road turns from smooth tar to sun-baked dirt as it approached the water. There is a small row of parking spaces, and not another soul around. Leaving the vehicle behind, one can walk down to the lake's shore and look over the water. The sun is hot and bright, but a wind blows just gently enough to keep the air comfortable. There are colorful canoes along the far away sides of the lake. The water is a narrow stretch, but it is long - looking straight out, one can only see a endless path of water into the horizon. Perhaps it even does go out to the ocean.
A rusted sign says No Swimming, but a dip doesn't seem necessary anyway. A small dock stretches out onto the water. Walking onto the firm wooden planks is like being on the playground again as a child. On each side one can see rocks and plants just underneath the water. They have a yellowish tone, with light rippling around them, and a slightly slimy look. Unfortunately, there are no fish to be seen. As one walks out further, the water darkens until even squinting, the bottom is no longer visible. With a shift of weight, one can gently rock the dock side to side. There's something entirely relaxing about water, or the calm, quiet day, or the warm weather. A temptation to go ahead and ignore that No Swimming sign. Not that a swim would be necessary, but it would be fun.
orion_mk3 - http://nonexistentbooks.wordpress.com (link to this month's post)
juniper - http://www.katjuniper.com/ (link to this month's post)
LadyMage - http://www.katherinegilraine.com/ (link to this month's post)
dolores haze - http://dianedooley.wordpress.com/ (link to this month's post)
jkellerford - http://jennykellerford.wordpress.com/ (link to this month's post)
Ralph Pines - http://ralfast.wordpress.com/ (link to this month's post)
AuburnAssassin - http://clairegillian.com/ (link to this month's post)
pezie - http://www.erinbrambilla.com/ (link to this month's post)
Inkstrokes - http://drlong67.wordpress.com/ (link to this month's post)
WildScribe - http://DionneObesoBlog.com/ (link to this month's post)
Guardian - http://daewrites.blogspot.com/ (link to this month's post)
Lyra Jean - http://lyratorres.wordpress.com/ (link to this month's post)
egoodlett - http://wordlarceny.blogspot.com/ (link to this month's post)
cwachob - http://www.corriewachob.blogspot.com/ (link to this month's post)
Aheïla - http://thewriteaholicblog.wordpress.com/ (link to this month's post)
faerydancer - http://digitalinkwell.wordpress.com (link to this month's post)
TheMindKiller - http://www.jabberwocky.ws/ (link to this month's post)
Irissel - http://irissel.blogspot.com/ (link to this month's post)
xcomplex - http://www.arielemerald.blogspot.com/ (link to this month's post)
Robbi Sommers Bryant - http://www.robbibryant.blogspot.com (link to this month's post)
This month's prompt: Setting the Scene
Write a location description, and make us feel as if we are there. No dialogue, no introductory comments, just a location. We're the tourists, you're the guide.
There's a divergence along the road, splitting off to the left. For the last few miles, drivers went by lush green trees with branches full of thick leaves, and only glimpses of a space beyond, glimpses at a silvery expanse of water. Now this new path leads to a clearing through the beautiful but isolating trees. The road turns from smooth tar to sun-baked dirt as it approached the water. There is a small row of parking spaces, and not another soul around. Leaving the vehicle behind, one can walk down to the lake's shore and look over the water. The sun is hot and bright, but a wind blows just gently enough to keep the air comfortable. There are colorful canoes along the far away sides of the lake. The water is a narrow stretch, but it is long - looking straight out, one can only see a endless path of water into the horizon. Perhaps it even does go out to the ocean.
A rusted sign says No Swimming, but a dip doesn't seem necessary anyway. A small dock stretches out onto the water. Walking onto the firm wooden planks is like being on the playground again as a child. On each side one can see rocks and plants just underneath the water. They have a yellowish tone, with light rippling around them, and a slightly slimy look. Unfortunately, there are no fish to be seen. As one walks out further, the water darkens until even squinting, the bottom is no longer visible. With a shift of weight, one can gently rock the dock side to side. There's something entirely relaxing about water, or the calm, quiet day, or the warm weather. A temptation to go ahead and ignore that No Swimming sign. Not that a swim would be necessary, but it would be fun.
orion_mk3 - http://nonexistentbooks.wordpress.com (link to this month's post)
juniper - http://www.katjuniper.com/ (link to this month's post)
LadyMage - http://www.katherinegilraine.com/ (link to this month's post)
dolores haze - http://dianedooley.wordpress.com/ (link to this month's post)
jkellerford - http://jennykellerford.wordpress.com/ (link to this month's post)
Ralph Pines - http://ralfast.wordpress.com/ (link to this month's post)
AuburnAssassin - http://clairegillian.com/ (link to this month's post)
pezie - http://www.erinbrambilla.com/ (link to this month's post)
Inkstrokes - http://drlong67.wordpress.com/ (link to this month's post)
WildScribe - http://DionneObesoBlog.com/ (link to this month's post)
Guardian - http://daewrites.blogspot.com/ (link to this month's post)
Lyra Jean - http://lyratorres.wordpress.com/ (link to this month's post)
egoodlett - http://wordlarceny.blogspot.com/ (link to this month's post)
cwachob - http://www.corriewachob.blogspot.com/ (link to this month's post)
Aheïla - http://thewriteaholicblog.wordpress.com/ (link to this month's post)
faerydancer - http://digitalinkwell.wordpress.com (link to this month's post)
TheMindKiller - http://www.jabberwocky.ws/ (link to this month's post)
Irissel - http://irissel.blogspot.com/ (link to this month's post)
xcomplex - http://www.arielemerald.blogspot.com/ (link to this month's post)
Robbi Sommers Bryant - http://www.robbibryant.blogspot.com (link to this month's post)
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